jc wanted me to add him to doy. i told him i'd have to consult with brit and aj. he was like 'but they'll say no'
he asked me again tonight. i told him he'd have to prove himself a poem before i constulted with brit and aj.
and this was his result.
AND he actually ASKED me to post this.
JC84559: post that
JC84559: so i can be on ur blog right?
JC84559: i mean i proved myself

JC84559: ill do a real one
Biting Flame: bliss.
JC84559: ok
Biting Flame: :b
JC84559: ooo this one is god
JC84559: good
Biting Flame: ok
JC84559: like?
Biting Flame: the new york kit
Biting Flame: i love the new york kit
Biting Flame: nice
Biting Flame: theres some nice elements
Biting Flame: could you write a poem without the magnetic poetry
JC84559: yeah
Biting Flame: ok
JC84559: lemme see um
JC84559:
the wind
an invisible grace
that touches but remains to be seen
that you feel but do not kno

JC84559: =)
JC84559: like that?
Biting Flame: its very simplistic
Biting Flame: and makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. i refuse for you to change your mind halfway through it
JC84559: so
JC84559: fine um
Biting Flame: 'invisible' does not equal 'remains to be seen'
JC84559: dont be so technical
Biting Flame: O_O
Biting Flame: ITS NOT TECHNICAL
Biting Flame: ITS A FACT
Biting Flame: ok for saying taht, you cant join
JC84559: u are
JC84559: and it does equal remains to be seen
JC84559: ok fine fine
JC84559: the wind
an invisible grace
that touches but remains to be UNseen
that you feel but do not kno
JC84559: sigh...i cant win with you can i
Biting Flame: poetry is not winning
Biting Flame: why do you want to join anyway
JC84559: because its kool and im like friends with all you people and shit
JC84559: u kno what im sayin
Biting Flame: ....... that was not the right answer
JC84559: that...
JC84559: and i like this poetry stuff
Biting Flame: -_-
Biting Flame: i'm sure
JC84559: if i didnt like it why would i even do that magnetic poetry stuff
JC84559: why would i even read the doy archives if i didnt
Biting Flame: like you read the archives!
JC84559: i do
Biting Flame: -_-
JC84559: the taste of week old chicken between the teeth
as your tounge moves around while your asleep
finally you get out that piece of brocili
now you can get some shut eye
Biting Flame: you wouldnt know poetry if it bit you in the ass
JC84559: yes i would
Biting Flame: i'm sure
JC84559: i would
Biting Flame: -_-
JC84559: im going to bed
JC84559: later